Ronny M.

  As I saw Paul Konerko step up to the plate I said, “This game is over!” It was the last inning and the White Sox were losing by 1 run. The pitcher pitched 1 ball after another. He had 3 balls and he swung for the next pitch, “Strike,” yelled the umpire. He also swung for the next pitch, “Strike two,” yelled the umpire again. It was all up to him. 1 more strike and they lost the game. I could feel the intensity that build in the crowd for Paul to hit the ball.

Isaac L.

There was 2 minutes on the clock left the game was tie next touch down is game

I could see the end of the field one hundred yards away from scoring.

My pulse was racing, I was so worried about the finally my team was conting on me I got in to postion my heart was beating hard. Ready… said the quarter back HIKE

There was 2 minutes on the clock left the game was tie next touch down is game

I could see the end of the field one hundred yards away from scoring.

My pulse was racing, I was so worried about the finally my team was conting on me I got in to postion my heart was beating hard. Ready… said the quarter back HIKE

Alexis C.

While I was about to leave the market  I noticed at the corner of my eye , I’m being followed . At that time nothing went through my mind but “keep walking”and that reapeated in my head over and over again. I started running but couldn’t  because 

 Of the the chains that were bringing me down . I saw a crowd of people so I ran through the crowd in to a narrow path. I waited  and waited , after sometime I ran back to the palace.

Gianna L.

WHEN I WOKE UP I WAS HAPPY CAUSE I WAS OUT OF MY DREAM. I DREAMT ABOUT AN OLD LADY AND SHE WAS TRYING TO KILL ME AND SHE SAID, “YOU WILL BE THE LAST EDITION TO MY COLLECTION.”IT WAS IN THE FOREST IN A SMALL VILLAGE THERE WAS BLOOD AND DEAD BODIES EVERYWHERE.AS I GOT OUT OF BED I GOT READY FOR CLASS .I RAN TO FIRST PERIOD AND I WAS LATE. ’’ WELL IT IS YOUR FIRST DAY AND YOU ARE LATE.” SAID MY HOME ROOM TEACHER MS. HUFFLIN AS SHE STARED AT ME ICE COLD.

Michael R.

“Thunder bird 2-3 come in,” said Pfc.Wrex. Roger Rogue Phantom. “What’s your primary location?”

“We are north of your location.10-4,” said Thunder bird 2-3.

“Rogue Phantom you better get outta there cause we got a mass of foot mobiles.”

“Ok,”  said Cpt.Romeo. “We’re at the top of the building popping green smoke. RPG!!!” Said Cpl.Geo. Lt.

“TWOFACE get on the mark 19 and take out any anti-air battery. Better hurry again those foot mobiles are on the roof tops. RPG!” yelled Cpt.Romeo.

Daniel B.

“Well mom said you guys have to be ready for boating practice at the docks”. “What!!!” said both twins droping their smelly ammo and smacking their foreheads in disbelife. “I thought you said that was tomorrow,” said john. “Well duh” said Tina like it was the most obvious thing in the world.

The twins remembered that they were going to attack tina with their dirty socks. They dove for the ground to get the socks and got  ready to strike between their beds At the next thing that came through their door.

Odalis A.

When I got up from my seat, Jamie made me carry her tray if I wanted to be with them. Her tray was heavy. She had smashed potatoes which were hot I mean really HOT! She didn’t eat anything neither did I because there wasn’t anything good to eat. My tray was light like a feather because I grabbed salad again. When I got up I saw chealse Jamie’s friend video taping me. I asked Jamie why she was video taping me. Jamie said,”oh that’s traditional, we do that every time a new member joins our club.” All of a sudden some ones shoe was in front of mine. The trays went swooshing off of my hands. I fell on my bottom, bam! The trays were still in the air. My tray fell on Jamie and Jamie just screamed. The HOT smashed potatoes fell on me I cried. It burned my head! I saw carter, Joey, and Cory with their trays heading to me they didn’t see me because people where in a circle around me. Carter was curious and she went to see what was going on. She saw me on the floor. “Joey, Cory! “, she screamed Joey and Cory came running to help me. All of a sudden my eyes became really heavy, I was half awake half asleep. “Carol! Carol!” called out Carter.” Wake up!” Joey and carter carried me to the schools hospital. I woke up in a white room in a white bed.” What happened?” I asked. “ Your okay”, said Carter.

Giovanna C.

Mary ran to the car smiling, but when she got to the car something was missing … “Her shoe,” it had fell off, she ran back to were her shoe was at, she bent down reached her left hand down and picked it up, (it was pink flats with a brown flower), “ Hurry up” yelled Jasmine, one of her best friends, “I’m coming,” Mary yelled back, Jasmine rolled her eyes at Mary, (Mary knew that when Jasmine rolled her eyes it meant that she was mad), she walked to the car smiling at Jasmine, in slowly to get on Jasmines nerves , and it was working , Jasmine kept on rolling her eyes, Mary opened the door to the car, and got in , “Lets go “ she said happily.

After a while Mary got lost in her thoughts thinking about what her mother had said earlier to her dad “ your daughter doesn’t care about no one but her self,” A tear slid down … “Mary, Mary, “ yelled Katie.“What, “ answered Mary,” are you ok?” asked Jasmine, “Yeah,  “ she answered back. “Have you been listening to anything we have said.”

Damian C.

“Wow, it’s so cool down there”, said Arthur while dazing at the brown sand below. It was the color that made your eyes dazzle and sprinkle.

  “It is pretty amazing isn’t it,” said Mike with an –o-shaped mouth. The most amazing thing was that they were on the flight to Egypt where most of the discoveries are made.

   “I can’t wait to finally visit Uncle Joe instead of him visiting us. This is going to be really fun,” said Arthur while smiling and lifting his hand for a high five.

Wilmar A.

He went inside and saw that it looked a lot smaller then it did from the outside. “This is a total dump.” He said. All of a sudden he heard noises coming from the next floor, he went upstairs to see what it was. He looked all over the place but couldn’t find anyone so he went outside and helped his mother unpack. Later, while he was fixing is new room he saw a strange shadow walk pass the hallway but didn’t see anyone.